Wednesday, October 3, 2012

bell hooks Assignment



Greg Warman
10-3-12
English 1510

Bell hooks Assignment

QDJ Answers

1)      Bell says she wanted to kill herself through her writing.  This was expression she had made to make it known the reader that she wanted to rid herself of the past she had created.

2)      Bio-mythography is not necessarily the truth-be-told happenings of an event but instead, it’s how you remember it to have happened.  This can be skewed based on emotions felt at the time, causing you to remember things differently. Bell’s work is definitely a great example because she’s explaining how she remembered it, which quite possibly isn’t exactly how everything happened.

3)      Hook uses the image from the get-go right out of the gates by telling the reader how she “wants to kill herself.” This is a very powerful thing to just come out and say, especially in the very beginning of the text.  This was an effective hook thought because it drew me to become curious as to why she would say this.  I, too, would come up with some sort of controversial and powerful way to grab my audience’s attention for my texts.

AEI Answer:
2) Identity is something that we can change through text.  If we conceal our true identity, changing our identity can bring about new lights in our writings by, for lack of a better word, “fooling” the audience into thinking something had happened that maybe really didn’t. Or that you’re a different person than what you actually are. Many things can cause a shift in identity in a text but no matter the cause or reason, it can be done.

Monday, October 1, 2012

Brandt Assignment



Greg Warman
10-1-12
Eng 1510
Brandt Assignment
                Brandt argues the changes in literacy over the course of 1895 to 1985.  In this argument she uses examples from the lives of a few people.  The example she uses of Raymond Branch and Dora Lopez really was an eye opener for me.  I can relate to the literacy journey that Raymond had: being born into a well-off family, having an expectation from everyone around me (family, friends, etc.)  to become educated by using all the new technology and learning tools that surround me in the community.  His story really made me think of myself and really see how education and literacy came about not so much because I yearned to acquire a better understanding and knowledge of language, but because it’s what everyone else did, what my parents wanted me to do, and what I was expected to do.  After reading about Dora’s story and how she had taught herself how to read and write and then went so far as to teach her family also, it opened my eyes to how much of a blessing and necessity it is to be literate.  For some people, like myself, I really overlooked the underlining reasoning of literacy.  I thought everyone was literate and going through the same processes as me.  After reading Dora’s story, I am now aware of how lucky I was to receive the education I did and developing my literacy.

Friday, September 21, 2012

TRAILOR PARK BOYS - Rickyisms!

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Writing Construct - Intro + Synthesis



Greg Warman
9-21-12
English 1510

Writing Construct: Personalities in Writing

Sources:

            What determines what we write about?  A past experience has been the root of some great pieces of writing.  Dreams, visions, and aspirations often fuel the flame in the creation of a new writing. How the writer thinks, what they think about, and their personality take over in their mind, allowing them to write about something of interest to them.  First, the writer will strive to define their own voice in their texts. After having a common voice that they write with in their texts, they tend to create patterns in their work.  These can be strategies in their writing to connect with their audience, such as humor, horror, romance, suspense, and other simple things like incorporating plays on words and foreshadowing.  All of these ideas, when used, begin to define the writer more and more. As the writer begins to feel comfortable with their own voice and the path they take in what they tend to write about, it is argued that this is when their inner personality is shown in their writing, which makes the text real, true, and interesting. This is how I was taught to write.  Look into yourself and write something that interests me and it’ll be “good enough.” With all this, though, to be a great writer, you’re probably going to need more than one popular text.  The writer’s been built to be themselves in their writing.  The writer, after they have had a period of success with previous texts, will feel a sort of demand from their audience.  At this point, the writer must determine whether or not they should write using their personality, or change it up to meet the demands and expectations of the audience. 
         

   Personality in writing links the audience to the author.  After many works, the audience is drawn in and can recognize a piece of writing by the author’s voice and personality in the writing. Biggs argues that the personality the audience grows fond of is due to the fact that the writer’s true morals, beliefs, ideas, opinions, and spiritual strengths are depicted in their writing.  Briggs’ offers that “Your stories are going to be and become part of you; some writers feel in an odd way as if their stories are ‘children’ — children of the mind. As children, they are going to be at least half you, and half whatever inspired them,” (Briggs 1).
           
           

Within the resources I’ve gathered, I’ve found contradiction in how a writer must dictate their personality in their writings.  Two of the resources, Biggs and Evans, state that to be a great writer, you must find yourself, be yourself, and always show yourself and your personality in your writing.  They argue that by doing this, you’ll find it easier to relate to your audience in your writing and that your text will be easier to understand and grasp on to. The other two resources that I have, Cook and Jenks, argue more about developing an idea of how you want to be perceived instead of completely flaunting your own individual personality.  They argue that to be a successful writer, one can learn to mold and frame their personality which will then cause their ideas in their text to be expressed in a personality, voice, and tone that aren’t personal to the writer, but what the writer intended to create to grasp the audience’s attention.  Jenks and Cook go on to argue that creating a “fake” interesting and original personality, it will gain popularity from the audience better than if you were to be yourself. Cook argues that a writer must be well developed and skilled to devise a personality that isn’t true to his own.

Tuesday, September 18, 2012

9-18-12 Bernhardt Assignment



g Warman          
9-18-12
English 1510

Bernhardt Assignment


Summary:
                In “Seeing Texts” by Stephen A. Bernhardt, the argument of visual apprehension is brought up.  This involves giving the text visual cues that go along with the actual written text.  Often, Bernhardt explains, the most logical and important information in the text is buried beneath the text itself. With visual texts being incorporated, the awareness of categories and divisions being explained within the text. By using a schematic representation of the text, such as a graph, hierarchy, or somehow dividing the information into different categories (paragraphs), allows the reader to pull most everything out of what the author is trying to get across.  Basically, a visual representation or design of the text is a gateway for the reader to get all the information, especially information that was initially hidden by the text itself, out of the text.

Synthesis:
                Bernhardt argues his point about visual representation being vital in texts because they bring up information that the reader would not have grasped from the written text itself.  His argument of using spatial representation for helping readers to obtain and retain information goes hand in hand with many researchers of the human mind and human intelligence.  His theory is similar to the idea that some people are visual/spatial learners: they must physically see the information in charts, graphs, or other organized fashions. 

Response:
                Bernhardt’s argument in this article is very interesting and informative.  His idea that a visual representation of a text helps the reader comprehend and really grasp all of the texts content made sense to me.  For myself, text that is organized into categories, charts, or paragraphs is a much easier read and I really draw all of the information out of it. Also, the fact that he incorporates an example, the picture on pages 43 and 44, really helps settle his idea and argument because when I looked at the picture, it allowed to me to connect the dots with his argument.  His argument is valid and correct because he proved it to me by giving me an example and causing me to see the results myself as I was able to better understand the argument.

QDJ Answers:
4) By every student following a specific format, it makes it easier on the teacher to grab all the information from each of the essays written by the students.  With each student’s essay being set up and formatted the same, the information of each essay will be found in the same spot (assuming the format is MLA and a certain amount of paragraphs/pages are mandated).
AEI Answers:
3) Bernhardt using the term gestalt in reference to the information that we do not originally derive from a text.  He explains how using visual representation of some form, the reader is made aware of information that they would not have originally obtained through the written text alone.